【寫作搶分句型】轉折語篇|transitions是閱卷老師的最愛!

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要讓文句連貫的的搶分吸睛魔法就是轉折語transitions,它們的功用是句子間的連接、主題間的切換、段落間的分隔。不論在哪一種目的的寫作,學測、指考、英檢、多益的作文,閱卷老師都非常重視轉折語的使用,只要有適當地使用上,閱卷老師都會大方給分的唷!

不同轉折語有不同使用的情境,一起來看看吧!

 

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轉折語的功用與位置

I. 功用:

轉折語transitions用來表示句子間的連接、主題間的切換、段落間的分隔,讓分開的句子或段落可以有意義地串連起來,增加文句的關聯性並讓讀者了解其間的邏輯。

 

II. 位置:

  1. 轉折語可以是一個詞或短語,通常放在句首,有些可當插入語中放在句子中間,有時候語氣較弱時,可放在句尾
  2. 注意,轉折語只是短語,沒有連接詞的功用,使用的時候要注意句子的連接:(1) 用句點,後面開始新的句子 (2) 用分號連接  (3) 加連接詞

Richard doesn’t like to play sports. He enjoys listening to music.
→ 二句是分開的,連結性低

( 👍 ) Richard doesn’t like to play sports. Instead, he enjoys listening to music.

(Richard不喜歡運動。 相反地,他喜歡聽音樂。 )

→ 二句用instead連接,good

→ 先用句點結束前一句再加轉折語

 

Meg has eaten much fruit. She has no appetite for food now.
→ 二句是分開的,連結性低

( 👍 ) Meg has eaten much fruit; therefore, she has no appetite for other food now.

(Meg吃了很多水果; 所以,她現在對其他食物沒有胃口了。 )

→ 二句用therefore連接,good

→ 用分號(; )連接再加轉折語

 

Luke spent all the money on his new iPad. He has no money in his bank account.
→ 二句是分開的,連結性低

( 👍 ) Luke spent all the money on his new iPad, and thus, he has no money in his bank account.

(Luke把所有的錢都花在了他的新 iPad 上,因此他的銀行帳戶裡沒有錢。)

→ 二句用thus連接,good

→ 用連接詞(, and)連接再加轉折語

 

轉折語的種類

I. 表示時間或順序

first首先
secondly, next第二, 再來
finally, lastly最後
to begin with, first of all首先
at the same time, meanwhile, simultaneously同時
later後來
then, afterward, subsequently然後, 接著
in the end, at last最後

There are many advantages of keeping early hours. To begin with, we can always get to school on time.

(保持早起有很多好處。 首先,我們總是可以準時到校。)

 

The proud marathon runner didn’t spend time on training. In the end, he lost the game.

(這位驕傲的馬拉松運動員沒有花時間訓練。 最後,他輸掉了比賽。)

 

II. 表示附加資訊

in addition, additionally此外
moreover, furthermore, besides此外
similarly, likewise同樣地
in the same vein同樣地
by the same token同樣地
in the same way以同樣的方式
not only A but also B不只A而且B

Penelope wishes to lose weight, so she reduces the amount of food she eats. In addition, she takes an aerobics class.

(Penelope希望減肥,因此她減少了吃的食物量。 此外,她還參加了有氧課。 )

 

What parents do can affect their children. Similarly, their education shapes their personality.

(父母的所作所為會影響他們的孩子。 同樣,他們的教育塑造他們的個性。)

 

III. 表示舉例或支持論句

for example, for instance例如
in other words, that is換句話說
in fact, as a matter of fact事實上

There are many ways to save endangered species. For instance, we can avoid destroying their habitat.

(拯救瀕危物種的方法有很多。 例如,我們可以避免破壞它們的棲息地。 )

 

Doing exercise on a regular basis can do you good. In fact, it can boost your immune system.

(定期鍛煉對你有好處。 事實上,它可以增強你的免疫系統。)

 

IV. 表示相反或相對的資訊

however, nonetheless, nevertheless, yet然而
on the contrary, in contrast相反地
instead反而

The kind-hearted man earns little money. However, he is always generous to donate money to help the needy.

(這心地善良的人賺的錢很少。 然而,他總是慷慨解囊,幫助有需要的人。 )

 

I thought Victor would keep his promise, but on the contrary, he stood us up.

(我以為Victor會信守諾言,但恰恰相反,他放我們鴿子。)

 

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V. 表示結果

therefore, thus, hence, consequently因此
accordingly因此
as a consequence因此

Some animals have thick fur; therefore, they can survive in extremely cold climate.

(有些動物有厚厚的皮毛; 因此,它們可以在極冷的氣候中生存。 )

 

Derek plucked up the courage to apologize for his mistake. As a consequence, he and his friend made up.

(Derek鼓起勇氣為自己的錯誤道歉。 因此,他和他的朋友和好了。)

 

VI. 引出結論

to sum up總之
all in all, in conclusion總之
in a nutshell, in a word, in brief, in short簡言之

To sum up, it is better to give than to take.

(總之,施比受有福 )

 

In a word, everyone can make the world a better place.

(總之一句話,每個人都可以讓世界變得更美好。)

 

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